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Tuesday 31 July 2018

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One day Asher went to the golden library the whole entire library was twinkling Asher found a book that he'd like to read so he did. He kept reading it for hours and hours then he felt a misty breeze blow violently at him, he didn't have a clue where he was. Asher tried to say his name but it just echoed. So he just explored this lonely place with no people, not even birds just a few hills! he had probably been concussed somehow and he couldn't remember, but why are there no people?

A blood-curdling growl came from in the distance he felt scared another growl came a bit closer now he was really sure this was not a dream he saw glowing in the distance it was a zombie he gripped his book in his hand and fled up one of the hills the zombie matter turned into a zombie Manya because it was high up on the hill so he dropped the book on accident and sprinted to the top of the tallest hill he forgot the book! Oh, no big deal the zombies were very slowly limping. So he snatched the book off the lush grass then it burned his hand, but also a hole in the ground it grew bigger and bigger to about the size of him, he remembered about the raging fire in the book "forget that"maybe he could fit in the hole. He managed to easily fit in now the zombies will have no chance of touching him. He stuck out his hand the book was still sizzling. There must be a way to get out of here so he read the place he had been reading last time and the ratchet of the zombies stopped. Bright lights shined on his face, now he was back in the colossal library.                  

4 comments:

  1. Your narrative is cool Asher i've read the whole thing

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  2. thanks
    is there anything i can work on/improve?

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  3. your narrative is good you just need to put more punctuation

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